심야버스 타러가는 11시까지 짐 보관해달라는 내용이랑 창문있는 방으로 배정해달라는 내용인데 영어곶아라 제대로 쓴건지 모르겠다ㅠㅠ

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Hello. I booked your hostel for 1day Oct 4, 2019. I'm glad to visit 도시이름 and your hostel. And before traveling I have a few requests.

First, would you please keep my luggage until around 11:00 PM after I check out? I will stay 도시이름 just 1 day, and I'm going to ride night bus 

at 11:30PM. If you keep my luggage until night, I can enjoy my trip more.  

Last, I want to stay the room where has window. That is very important to me.

Please check it. I will wait your reply. Thank you!